Sunday, November 6, 2011


hey guys! so these are the character thumbs I was working on. would be great to get some critic, let me know what you think before i go ahead and do a more rendered color. Im liking the face and stature of the one holding the banner. Want her to have a sense of vulnerability. sleep time.


  1. Hey Richard, looks like you're going in the right direction as far as the character amd armor is concerned. She looks young and confident.

    As far as the drawing you are looking at doing is concerned, i think that it's very static and somewhat awkward. You're losing the figure underneath all that armor and the pose has no motion. It looks especially flat next to the other drawing you fleshed out, which doesn't lose the figure and has a lot of action in the pose. There is a lot more storytelling going on in the pose in profile however, more so if you give it some context, so i think you should still go for it, just work out how the figure is twisting and moving in space underneath her costume.

  2. cheers for the crit man, ill get on that :)

  3. good job! :) can't wait to see the finished piece :)